Talk:USS Cape Esperance/GA1

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 15:02, 9 January 2020 (UTC)

• USS Cape Esperance (CVE-88) was a Casablanca-class escort carrier What does CVE, T-CVE-88 and T-CVU-55 mean?

• Escort carrier, aircraft transport carrier, and utility aircraft transport carrier. I've tried my best to allude to this without strapping ugly parentheses into the text.

• I see 3 howevers maybe remove one?
• in order to replace heavy early war losses Same as her sisters' article we're speaking about WWII right?
• which drove two shafts, providing 9,000 horsepower (6,700 kW) Link both shafts and kW.
• hangar deck: one each fore and aft.[3][2][4] Re-order the refs here.
• One 5-inch (127 mm)/38 caliber dual-purpose gun was mounted This is sea of blue is there a way to avoid this?

• As noted in the other review, not really.

• transport carrier throughout most of its time in service --> "transport carrier throughout most of her time in service"?
• under a Maritime Commission contract, MC hull 1125, by Kaiser Shipbuilding Company MC is Maritime Commission right?

• Yes.

• which named escort carriers after bays or sounds in Alaska Pipe Alaska to the Territory of Alaska.
• as part of a new naval policy which named subsequent Casablanca-class carriers --> " as part of a new naval policy which named subsequent Casablanca-class carriers"
• to the Fast Carrier Task Force operating against Japanese positions Pipe Japanese to the Empire of Japan.
• she rendezvoused with the Third Fleet about 300 mi (480 km) east of Luzon No nmi?
• At 1:00 in the night, fueling operations --> "At 01:00 in the night, fueling operations"
• approximately 160 mi (260 km) northwest, and comfortably safe No nmi?
• due southwards, 180 mi (290 km) from where Same as above.
• typhoon's center some 100 mi (160 km) away Same as above.
• At 7:00, on the morning of 18 December, the fleet was inescapably --> "At 07:00, on the morning of 18 December, the fleet was inescapably"
• At 9:52, Cape Esperance began maneuvering independently --> "At 09:52, Cape Esperance began maneuvering independently"
• she steamed for Hong Kong, where she evacuated planes Pipe Hong Kong to British Hong Kong.
• and proceeded to transport aircraft to Pakistan in 1956 Unlink Pakistan.

Images

• Some of the images' sources are dead?

Infobox

• Link nmi.
• The men weren't included in the body?
• (1944-1946) --> (1944–1946)
• (1946-1950) --> (1946–1950)
• (1950-1959) --> (1950–1959)

Sources

• Y'Blood, William --> Y'Blood, William T.

That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 15:02, 9 January 2020 (UTC)

@CPA-5: I've responded to your points. Stikkyy t/c 06:51, 10 January 2020 (UTC)

• @Stikkyy: Another question is where are Maksel and Stubblebine's sources? And the The Daily News's source should be included in the "Online sources" section. Also the circas need templates. I these issues are addressed, we can finally promote her. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 09:30, 10 January 2020 (UTC)

@CPA-5:  Done Stikkyy t/c 07:14, 11 January 2020 (UTC)

• Ready to go. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 15:34, 19 February 2020 (UTC)